The summary looks too brief. Please include a title, names of students, research questions, data collection methods, expected outcomes, etc.
Try not to include articles from news website as the reference, if there are better alternatives. Pls replace the first reference. I guess it’s quite easy to find an academic reference for convergence theory.
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