I attached my personal statement for admission to a local MBA program. I received feedback that the statement is cocky and pandering and that it lacks a compelling story. I need to incorporate a stronger sense of dedication and passion. I also need to explain how the school benefits me and how I will benefit the school.
All applicants go through a series of tests that check their level of English and knowledge of formatting styles. The applicant is also required to present a sample of writing to the Evaluation Department. If you wish to find out more about the procedure, check out the whole process.