you need to revise the draft first, then write the discussion. Remember read the feedback carefully, the professor does not allow to use primary source,as well as survey data, he only allwo to use SECONDARAY DATA. This means you need to remove all survey data and primary data from the draft.
All applicants go through a series of tests that check their level of English and knowledge of formatting styles. The applicant is also required to present a sample of writing to the Evaluation Department. If you wish to find out more about the procedure, check out the whole process.