I already write my dissertation and this is my tutor feedback I need you to correct the mistakes and proof reading as well There are a number of issues in your dissertation that require your careful attention – Review each chapter and update according to feedback – There are many incorrect presentations in the analysis section. Please remove the hypothesis and state the issues as point of interest or another form. – The correlation and regression analyses are not done and presented correctly. The correlation shows a weak relationship but you did not address this. The regression is not a good model as it has very low coefficient of determination. You did not address this issue. I have seen the same issue in another student dissertation which is presented in a very similar but incorrect manner. Please take extra care if you are motivated to do it this way because another student has done it. I strictly advised the student to improve the work. Please focus on frequency distribution, descriptive statistical analysis and correlation analysis. – Remove the regression analysis – The discussion section is very brief. Once the qual and quan analysis is completed, you need to bring the results together and discuss in relation to relevant literature. – The entire work requires proof reading and layout improvement.
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