I have attached the six source essay so there needs to be four sources added. after the reference page of the six source essay I put the remarks from the professor.

I have attached an example of a completed Literature Review/multi source essay for direction.

I have put 4 pages since that is what the amount of words that need to be added to the six source essay would be equal to. You are to add 4 sources and add to the current writing by fixing and reviewing what the professor has said.

Summary of Assignment
Writing Assignment #4
The Multiple-Source Synthesis Essay: Literature Review
Task: The multiple-source essay asks you to synthesize the arguments of at least 10 sources
Length: 2000-3000 words
Format: APA
Sources: a total of at least 10 sources, all of which should be from scholarly journals or credible trade journals. You should find your sources through library searches.
o If you cite sources from websites or popular journals, these sources should be in addition to the 10 sources you have cited from scholarly or trade journals.
Topic: Please use the same topic that you used for writing assignment #3. It is recommended that you focus on or expand on the essay that you wrote for writing assignment #3. You will continue with the topic you have selected and will conduct additional searches in the library databases, hopefully focus the topic more, and determine the 10 or more sources to use in this essay.
Integration of Sources: At least eight sources must be cited in the body of the essay. You may cite sources in your introduction to help you define terms, and you may cite sources in your conclusion to help you direct the reader to further inquiry. However, the body of the essay should synthesize at least eight sources.
Strategies in Developing the Topic for this Essay
Up to this point in the semester, you have completed an annotated bibliography. You have also incorporated and synthesized four sources into writing assignment #2 and six sources into writing assignment #3. The work you have completed for these assignments provides a soli