Please can you help in editing my essay on The politics, policies, challenges and outcomes of sport development programmes in Canada. I have had some feedback and it needs some work. I am including the originally submitted word document and a pdf showing the feedback. Also Essay outline, referencing guide and reading. I need to somehow get this organised and flowing and some better referencing.
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