The essay should include a response to both the Ted Talk and the article.
TedTalk Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ks-_Mh1QhMc
Article Link:https://www.staroutico.com/latest-news/influence-body-language
The introduction should start with a hook and a short summary on both the Ted Talk and the article listed above. Plus it should also end with my thesis statement which is :An individual’s body language can affect his/her academic success, communication style and responsibility.
These are the points I need you to include in the 3 body paragraphs:
Body 1: Body language is a form of communication from one person to another.
Body 2:Body language can affect a students grade.
Body 3:Our bodies changes our minds and our minds changes our thoughts.
In the conclusion you should restate the thesis.

I added a document which consists of two non continued paragraphs which you might want to include or rewrite.